Tuesday, February 12, 2013

No Vacancy

no vacancy
for broken hearts
no vacancy
for half truths
and empty promises
no vacancy
the lobby's closed
the lights turned off.

13 comments:

  1. I like this one, we all need to say "no vacancy" to pain of this kind, any kind really,, :-)

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  2. No rooms available
    For this
    Fiction
    Of yours
    Late night Lotharios
    Fill the door
    last chance love
    you say
    Lucky you
    you say
    last chance love
    You say
    So
    I say
    Once more
    No rooms available
    Late night Lothario
    There's the door

    Chris McQueeney 12/12 13. 8:08 P.M

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    1. Ben...Id be your late night Lothario (platonicly of course) any night:-)

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  3. Could be uplifting..."no vacancy" meaning "we're full of quite the opposite of these things."

    Could be depressing..."no vacancy" meaning "we're at capacity for these things."

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  4. There are times we must shut ourselves off from pain...or it could be the heart is too full to allow any negative in...Nice work!

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