Wow ... the last paragraph made me sit up ... amazing wordplay !!!
Thanks, GS. I'm glad it was a good finish :)
Agreed with Green Speck! I love this one Ben!
Thanks, Heather :-) How are you?
Self-discovery can be not so much fun at times, Glad the alcohol was in his dreams otherwise he would have more to deal with. Really good write. Sad but sometimes true.
Yes, there's restraint in dealing with the saddness.
Thank you, Wodke :-)
No, Ben Ditty sounds resigned, but as usual written witheconomy and quiet emotion.
I guess I was a little ;-)
hope these kind of days are few and far between.
Sad! Great job
You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!