Sunday, October 14, 2012

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If your favorite song
Still makes you cry
Then you’re okay and
Don’t despair.

If you’re feeling
Lonely in the rain
The rain is too.

Kiss the air and
Cleanse your soul.

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11 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaMonday, October 15, 2012 at 4:53:00 AM EDT

    Such a refreshing poem ... loved it !!!

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  2. BerlinerinPoetMonday, October 15, 2012 at 5:13:00 PM EDT

    I don't know if this was intentional, but this totally reminds me of that Billie Myers song "Kiss the Rain."

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    1. Ben DittyMonday, October 15, 2012 at 8:46:00 PM EDT

      I guess it is a little similar :-) Just read the lyrics!

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  3. Aguilar ElliotWednesday, October 17, 2012 at 9:47:00 PM EDT

    never thought of the rain being lonely too.

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  4. WanderFriday, October 19, 2012 at 7:11:00 PM EDT

    Hi Ben! Blogger has eaten your posts...for some reason

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    1. Ben DittySaturday, October 20, 2012 at 4:29:00 PM EDT

      Dang :-( I hate blogger nom noms.

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    2. WanderSaturday, October 20, 2012 at 5:40:00 PM EDT

      I do too...because then I end up not seeing, and not being able to publically acknowledge your awesomeness!

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    3. UnknownSunday, October 21, 2012 at 1:41:00 AM EDT

      Beautiful Ben❤

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  5. UnknownMonday, November 12, 2012 at 7:59:00 PM EST

    Lotrs of songs make me cry!

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