I really like this one, Ben,,, "flooding narrow avenues with rage",,been there,, "lost within a fog of my creation", been there too,,,but I couldn't express the feelings as well as you have here,,,,:-)
Thank you, Ellecee. I'm really happy it moved you :-)
lost within a fog of my creation...I know what that is like. I have a temper. I don't often unload on anyone, but fume inside...thankfully writing takes care of a lot of it. Love this piece!
I feel the same, Susie. Poetry helps me from unloading on loved ones.
This is so beautifully expressed ... the anguish so natural !!!
Lost within a fog of my creation...nicely done.
You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!