Saturday, January 26, 2013

Writing with Eyes Closed

My world is one where I can lay in grass
While at the same time be flying in the sky
Ignore the details and minutia of it all
I was meant to swim in a volcano,
Float through outer space
Become the sunlight and reflect
Off atmospheres where
Light has never been;
Become the clouds and sing
To creatures more mysterious and
Beautiful than I could ever know
Without the stars - but who I am?

Image Source: Nuke the Fridge

Kerry at Real Toads challenged us to create our own imaginary world.

21 comments:

  1. Love the title..."Ignore the details and minutia of it all" I like that. Just be..just live..Beautiful piece Ben.

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  2. This is a wonderful world you have created !!!

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  3. Yes, this is the full package of 'a better place'. I love the notion of swimming in volcanoes!

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  4. This world of yours sounds like a beautiful place to live my friend.

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  5. I love the process of writing ~ Floating through outer space is what I do all the time too ~ Enjoyed the world through your eyes ~

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  6. Beautiful images you create here,,,I would love to be floating just as you were,,,and perhaps asking the same question,,,

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  7. Like a beautiful riddle ... your other world!!

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  8. Holy crap...this is awesome. You captured fantasies in a way many others fail to do...kudos on this work.

    I re-read this quite a few times:

    "I was meant to swim in a volcano,
    Float through outer space
    Become the sunlight and reflect
    Off atmospheres where
    Light has never been;"

    It's a great concept as well as visual.

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    1. Thank you so much, Jack. You really got what I was saying.

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  9. You are a very talented Poet for sure.. Love this.

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  10. beautiful! I would love to fly too! and yes swim in a volcano..."Float through outer space
    Become the sunlight and reflect"- that is what I love most :)

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