Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Thoughts on Raindrops

I wonder if
the raindrops think
they are a storm
or separate?

I wonder if
the raindrops cry
for one another as
they hit the ground?

I wonder if
the raindrops envy
snowflakes that
are not the same?

I wonder if
the raindrops feel
different on the ground
in puddles?

I wonder if
the raindrops know
that heat will be
the end of them?

11 comments:

  1. I think the raindrops think they are separate. I believe they are each individual beings :)

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  2. Story of a raindrop ... you portrayed it beautifully :-)

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    1. Thank you :-) Raindrops make wonderful stories.

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  3. Ben, I seriously needed a smile...and yoou delivered!!!

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  4. I've wondered about that too, Ben,,thank you for putting my thoughts into words :-)

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    1. You're welcome, Ellecee. I think of rain a lot.

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  5. I really enjoyed this one. I prefer to have the questions unanswered, though. Pondering can have more meaning than knowing at times.

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  6. I really like the very first stanza of this one.

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