Saturday, October 20, 2012

Conscious

I don’t remember
If I kissed you in your sleep
Or we were dreaming.

The lake waits
For the wind to breathe;
Freezing her.


Prompt "Conscious" by Haiku Heights
 
Image Source: hplusmagazine.com

34 comments:

  1. Nice one ~ I like the lake waiting for the wind ~

    Grace

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  2. Awesome Ben! Made me feel good reading this..thanks for sharing❤❤

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  3. Awesome, this is great for a love song too - ♥

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    1. That's interesting. I love reading lyrics to love songs ;-)

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    2. Hi Ben, tq for dropping by my 'other blog'.. My Haiku's actually at http://mamatimsite.blogspot.com/2012/10/conscious.html
      Hugs for taking the trouble... – ♥

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  4. This is superb ... I loved the way you described the love in this piece !!!

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    1. Thanks, GS. I'm a big fan of love poems/songs.

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  5. Its surreal! sorta like some lyric, good text.

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    1. Thanks, Dark Angel. I get criticized a lot for being too surreal.

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  6. How delicious to wait for the wind to breathe! Lovely words, every one.

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  7. It doesn't matter if the speaker remembers or not: It's the thought the counts. (I think.)



    Conscious

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    1. True. And maybe a part of them remembers unconciously.

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  8. I feel like the only blogger not Haikuing! And worse, I feel like I'm back in algebra and I just don't get it :(

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    1. It's okay, Monkey. It's just structured verse like a sonnet. Not much to get.

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  9. Loved both. Te lake waiting for the wind to breathe is a beautiful image.

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  10. A beautiful poem...thank you for the inspiration to create mine from your work.

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  11. I enjoyed these very much. Romantic and lyrical. "The lake waits
    For the wind to breathe;" I love those lines.

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