Nice one ~ I like the lake waiting for the wind ~Grace
Me too. The nature ones are always interesting.
Great poem Ben.
Thanks, Sus :-)
Awesome Ben! Made me feel good reading this..thanks for sharing❤❤
:-D You're the awesome one, Kim!
Awesome, this is great for a love song too - ♥
That's interesting. I love reading lyrics to love songs ;-)
Hi Ben, tq for dropping by my 'other blog'.. My Haiku's actually at http://mamatimsite.blogspot.com/2012/10/conscious.htmlHugs for taking the trouble... – ♥
It's no trouble. I enjoy poetry :-)
This is superb ... I loved the way you described the love in this piece !!!
Thanks, GS. I'm a big fan of love poems/songs.
Its surreal! sorta like some lyric, good text.
Thanks, Dark Angel. I get criticized a lot for being too surreal.
How delicious to wait for the wind to breathe! Lovely words, every one.
Thanks, Barbara :-)
It doesn't matter if the speaker remembers or not: It's the thought the counts. (I think.)Conscious
True. And maybe a part of them remembers unconciously.
I feel like the only blogger not Haikuing! And worse, I feel like I'm back in algebra and I just don't get it :(
It's okay, Monkey. It's just structured verse like a sonnet. Not much to get.
Loved both. Te lake waiting for the wind to breathe is a beautiful image.
Thanks, Sara :-)
A beautiful poem...thank you for the inspiration to create mine from your work.
You're welcome, Susie. I loved your poem :-)
I enjoyed these very much. Romantic and lyrical. "The lake waitsFor the wind to breathe;" I love those lines.
Thanks, Elcee :-D
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