Thought provoking Ben Ditty! I concur, energy is transfered. I'm not laughing either, but maybe likewise joy is never destroyed and some is coming my way. Wooohooo.
I hope joy is coming your way. You're one awesome chick :-)
Ben...those are some vindictive painfull words at the end"I’d like to think and somewhere You’re still cryingI’m not laughing."Good poem!
I actually changed it at the last minute it was:"I'd like to think and somewhereYou're still laughingI'm not crying."But I thought. I don't feel like crying in this poem. Glad the change worked out.
Gave me chills. Great work.
Were they multiplying? Electrifying? ;-) Sorry, had to quote Grease there.
Yup. This one got me close to the bone. Then of course, there's the song as I read it "You put your arms around me and I'm home." But it was your words. Powerful poem, Ben.
Christina Perri does tend to make things more interesting; showers, walking, etc. ;-)
I've love to go to Burning Man. Wanna go?? I'd burn clear to the bone. Awesome write, my favorite gnome-lover. xo
I'd love to go :-)
You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!