Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Shoestring

Organic Shoe String
 
 
you are the pebble in my shoe
I can't shake out
and I will wear the pain of you
until my sole is worn
tie myself to you each day
with courage and a perfect loop.

6 comments:

  1. LOVE the metaphors and analogies here Ben. You rock.

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    1. You too, Keith :-)

      Your support keeps me writing.

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  2. Such clear and sharp imagery - pebble in the shoe ~

    Beautiful Ben ~

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    1. Seemingly mundane, but highly symbolic :-) Thanks, Grace!

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  3. Shoe laces play important role in our lives on a daily basis, yet we do not pay much important to them !!!

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You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!