Wednesday, April 03, 2013

Joiner

I've joined those
who hide inside
afraid of breaking
what we've built
from sticks and mud
along a fault line.
 
I've joined those
without a name
avoiding fire
in the flames.
 
Flame
 

10 comments:

  1. Brilliance in metaphor and deliverance, powerful! xoxo

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  2. This one is really good, Ben. "Avoiding fire in the flames" Perfect!

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  3. I, too, join those who maybe commit ironic behavior. The fault line section was great.

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  4. Loving "along a fault line" and "avoiding fire in the flames" are not easy ways to go. I really like this one,,it has edges :-)

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