Yes I was drawn to the stars are witches too..how do you get your words Ben? I sense night time scribbling..crisply drawn onto the page when daylight comes..maybe..jae
Ben...again your creativity amazes me! As I started writing my comment the thought that some day you and I will sit on wrters panels together answering questions raised the hair on my arms almost like premonition
Awesome ... I loved the 1st line !!!
ReplyDeleteMe too :-D
DeleteSimply gorgeous. The perfect words in the perfect order. You're an awesome poet! xoxo
ReplyDeleteOh, my, that's amazing coming from an awesome poet like yourself :-)
DeleteInteresting take on the stars :) Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tiger :-)
DeleteI think it was partly inspired by that scene in Lion King.
Yes I was drawn to the stars are witches too..how do you get your words Ben? I sense night time scribbling..crisply drawn onto the page when daylight comes..maybe..jae
ReplyDeleteOo that's a poem in itself, Jae :-)
DeleteWhat can I say Ben. You're the Haiku king.. I love it..
ReplyDeleteAnd you are a queen :-)
DeleteI love the concept, a further burning of stars...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jack. They're always burning. Sometimes long before we realize.
DeleteI never thought of stars as witches ~ Creative take on the night sky ~
ReplyDeleteThanks, Grace! That was said with grace ;-)
DeleteBen...again your creativity amazes me! As I started writing my comment the thought that some day you and I will sit on wrters panels together answering questions raised the hair on my arms almost like premonition
ReplyDeleteAwwe it would be an honor, Chris! :-)
Deleteinteresting comparison.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Aguilar :-) I wanted to get the two extremes for the prompt.
DeleteThe sky on brooms....love that.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susie :-D
DeleteWhat do you think of when you see the stars?
I would love to see those star witches!
ReplyDeleteHaha me too.
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