Awesome ... I loved the 1st line !!!
Me too :-D
Simply gorgeous. The perfect words in the perfect order. You're an awesome poet! xoxo
Oh, my, that's amazing coming from an awesome poet like yourself :-)
Interesting take on the stars :) Nicely done.
Thanks, Tiger :-)I think it was partly inspired by that scene in Lion King.
Yes I was drawn to the stars are witches too..how do you get your words Ben? I sense night time scribbling..crisply drawn onto the page when daylight comes..maybe..jae
Oo that's a poem in itself, Jae :-)
What can I say Ben. You're the Haiku king.. I love it..
And you are a queen :-)
I love the concept, a further burning of stars...
Thanks, Jack. They're always burning. Sometimes long before we realize.
I never thought of stars as witches ~ Creative take on the night sky ~
Thanks, Grace! That was said with grace ;-)
Ben...again your creativity amazes me! As I started writing my comment the thought that some day you and I will sit on wrters panels together answering questions raised the hair on my arms almost like premonition
Awwe it would be an honor, Chris! :-)
Thanks, Aguilar :-) I wanted to get the two extremes for the prompt.
The sky on brooms....love that.
Thanks, Susie :-DWhat do you think of when you see the stars?
I would love to see those star witches!
Haha me too.
You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!