Saturday, September 01, 2012

Haiku in the Night

Hearing the child
her crying makes me realize
honesty is sweet.

Thunder from the sky
and train become a chorus
with the ceiling fan.

The wind howls much like
wolves, coyotes that were shot
and then forgotten.

8 comments:

  1. Nice haiku set...specially the thunder and wind howls ~ I write a lot of haiku in my other blog ~

    If you like there is a daily prompt over at Haiku Heights for this month ~ I blog there as Grace ~

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  2. interesting.
    i like the line "honesty is sweet".

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  3. These work fantastically together..the chug of the fan hauling us through the story..like a train..splashes of light..in quite a harshly learnt story perhaps? jae

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    1. Thanks, Jae. That's the thought I was going for :-)

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  4. cool haiku! i particularly like the wolves, coyote one.

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