Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Early Morning Thoughts on Love

Love is so intangible, while
At the same time tangible.
You can feel it in the moment,
As it courses through you
But you may never give it back,
Or store it in the attic,
For a rainy day.

Memories are non-refundable,
And bought on impulse.
A kiss, a touch, will wax
Before they wane.

11 comments:

  1. Good poem..."will wax before they wain" exlent! You have jedi like writing

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  2. I like it, Good poem to start my morning off for sure..Thanks, Ben.

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    1. Thank you, Susie :-)

      You're an awesome writer friend to have! :-)

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    1. I named this comment of the week on my Facebook author page ;-)

      https://www.facebook.com/?ref=tn_tnmn#!/benjaminditmars

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  4. One of these comments looks suspiciously S-P-A-Mmy...thought you should know if you don't already.

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    1. I did, but just got around to deleting it ;)

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