Friday, April 27, 2012

Mercurial

She was fire
with a heart of ice,
aflame yet cold.
Her touch melting
before freezing me.
Ember snowflakes
In the breeze;
The sky exploding
From behind my eyes;
Passions we both felt
Before the plunge.


8 comments:

  1. Outstanding. "Ember snowflakes
    In the breeze" I especially love that image.

    (I love this guitar music.)

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    1. Thank you so much. Awesome readers like you make it all worth writing :)

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  2. the contrasting images in this one are cool!

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  3. I like the opening line "she was fire, with a heart of ice"...irony

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  4. I second @Aguilar Elliot The contrasts really make the poem.

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