How sad Ben ~ ouch in the sorrow ~
It's a part of life, but at least we learn.
Beautiful and sorrowful at the same time...I love it.
Thanks. It had been a long time since I wrote haiku.
a poignant piece !!! beautifully woven.
Thanks, GS! Your comments always encourage me.
Melancholy, but still very lovely.
If it were a dog it would be melancollie.
You've found your way inside my head and now there's no way out!
How sad Ben ~ ouch in the sorrow ~
ReplyDeleteIt's a part of life, but at least we learn.
DeleteBeautiful and sorrowful at the same time...I love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks. It had been a long time since I wrote haiku.
Deletea poignant piece !!! beautifully woven.
ReplyDeleteThanks, GS! Your comments always encourage me.
DeleteMelancholy, but still very lovely.
ReplyDeleteIf it were a dog it would be melancollie.
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